Molly White: i feel like this ad copy needs a little more workshopping

i feel like this ad copy needs a little more workshopping

Here's another one which needed at least one more round of review

I bet the draft was labeled “modest proposal” but that went over the manager’s head

Superb

[with mouthful of bees] reads fine to me

We know how this ends.

I know that they're in pain but I'd be lying if I said dogs aren't SO cute when they look like this

shoved a bunch of bees in my mouth, now what

Get yourself an epipen and stand close enough to call an ambulance for when the toxic buildup starts to hit.

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dang you win, quickdraw

Mouthful of bees is what the words are giving, the picture, mouthful if something nasty

Out of all the weird choices, I am most confused by the choice of word emphasis? HELP save bees by the MOUTHFUL The first thing I see is HELP MOUTHFUL and that is confusing, and then the ad does not alleviate my confusion.

If BEES was also capitalized it would make sense as a cry for help

Yes

Is this one of those "Americans will measure in anything but the metric system" memes?

Here to ruin this A+ joke post with an extremely sincere book recommendation (cc @kellylink.bsky.social since I can’t find Kij Johnson on here):

At the Mouth of the River of Bees: Stories a book by Kij Johnsonbookshop.org A sparkling debut collection from one of the hottest writers in science fiction: her stories have received the Nebula Award the last two years running. These stories feature cats, bees, wolves, dogs, ...

amazing

Where else do I put the bees In a hive?

Did the Candyman write this

My dumbass dog: oh this is GREAT

I feel like the idiot who thought using a Plagiarising Engine for advertising should be hung, drawn and quartered.

You're acting like humans haven't thought of dumber advertising than this without the assistance of a computer.

“Graphic design is my passion”

What even is that jar, it looks like one of those multi-colored sand jars created by AI

And the irony: honeybees are an invasive non-native species, and out-compete native bees for food and resources, exacerbating the problem.

or what, you'll release the dogs? or the bees? or the dogs with bees in their mouth and when they bark they shoot bees at you?

That's the best peanut butter. I could do without the stingers though.

As a copywriter I'm gonna hard agree

How did this make it past the editors

Mouthful o' Bees

www.youtube.com/watch?v=nlIQ...

www.youtube.com

Help save bees with every bite.

Also stop eating almond butter?

Instructions unclear, throat swelling

“Eat Justin’s almond butter with honey, save a bee colony!”

Wait they’re called beehives fUCK

Mmmmm.... endangered bees...

No way, Adobe would acquire full copyrights to it if photoshopped

OMG I am in public and cannot stop chortling 😂😂😂

It’s true: usually bees are preserved in quantities of several mouthsful, in cans about the size one would use for tuna:

I think “by the spoonful” could work? That doesn’t give the same feeling of eating bees and the image is kinda cute? 🐝🥄 “By the mouthful” is definitely not great!

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